Subject: Words Author: farnarkler : member since February, 2004 : 1229 posts Posted on: 2006-03-23 21:59:36

No offense, but I don't like the wording of your objective at all - but perhaps I don't count as I'm "foreign". But, for what its worth, it reads very poorly to me. It is headed "Objective" but then fails to say what your objective is! - apart from looking for a job.


Seeking a challenging position with a Company (why a capital C?) that recognizes and rewards employees adding value to the (starship) enterprise. I have added value (again) in the areas of sales, customer service, training,(no space)and financial planning. I am a self starter (electric?) that (who?) learns quickly, and once aligned (like a front end), requires (will require?) minimal supervision.

The following may not suit you - but hope it helps:

I am seeking a challenging position with a company that values its employees and recognizes and rewards their contribution. I have been succesful in sales, customer service, training, and financial planning. My particular interest is (?) and I hope to concentrate my career in this area. I am dynamic, enthusiastic, and require minimal supervision.

Wish I had more time.. Farnarkler

Farnarkler - '97 740iL Tow Hitch, GDO, Always on TV, NAV, Tiptronic

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